This story is Part 5 in the series Fire and Water. It follows Landfall. To read from the beginning, please visit the Index Page.
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Lourlan stood in the kitchen, fiercely chopping carrots. Malen sat at the table, watching her as he sharpened a knife for Findol to take with him on his journey.
“Careful that you don’t cut yourself,” he said. Lourlan dropped her knife with a clatter. She sat down, her face grim.
“He’s never been more than a day away from home,” she said. “Why did the Queen choose him? He knows nothing of demons and shapeshifters, and precious little of magic. He’s unprepared.”
Malen sighed, considering his words.
“Well, the dragons chose him first. They’re sending Aurmid along to protect him. Surely she’ll train him for what he needs to do. He’s unique because he’s your son. That’s why the Queen chose him, because of his heritage and because the dragons favor him.”
Lourlan glared at him in the way that meant she knew he was right, but was unhappy about it nevertheless.
“Did he tell you he spotted Zaghran while he was still far out to sea? He used the long sight to get a look at him. I didn’t know he possessed that ability.”
“No, I didn’t know.” Malen frowned at this. “Then he has power that he hasn’t found in himself yet. Don’t worry, dear. Our boy will be all right.”
She gave him another dark glare.
Findol came in then, hauling a pack behind him, dressed warmly for traveling. He saw his mother’s look and his face went pale.
“Coanh insists on coming with me,” he said. “I’m glad I’ll have him to climb with and talk to. He’s a better cook than I am, too.”
Malen smiled; Lourlan rolled her eyes. She got up and turned to stuff a loaf of bread into a canvas pouch that already bulged with food. She fastened it and handed it to Findol.
“This should last the two of you a few days. Then you’ll have to hunt for your supper.”
Malen sheathed the knife in a leather scabbard and held it out to Findol.
“And here’s something to help with that and other things, if a need should arise.”
Findol slipped the knife into his belt and put the food in his pack.
“Thank you both,” he said. He sat down at the table, and Lourlan poured him a cup of tea. He sipped it slowly.
“Mama, what can you tell me about this Zaghran? The Queen wants Aurmid and me to bind him and bring him back. That’s the idea, anyway. But what was his crime to get himself bound in the Deep for thousands of years? He must have done something truly evil, mustn’t he?”
Lourlan sighed, troubled, and sat down again.
“I doubt anyone remembers the true reason,” she said. “I think the Old Ones feared his power, mostly. He was a thing of pure magic, not bound by physical form. He roamed the world, affecting things with a touch, a mere look. He changed things, created things outside the purview of the Old Ones. He brought uncertainty to the world when the Old Ones wanted order above all else.”
“The Old Ones,” Findol echoed. “You don’t hear tell of them very often, either.”
“You tend to stay away from the old priest,” Malen chuckled. “That’s why you don’t hear of them.”
“I thought they left this world long ago,” Findol said.
“So they did,” Lourlan said. “The ancestors worshiped the Old Ones as gods. But once they left, the people realized they were not true gods, not creators, but only shapers, like water shapes stone. Life continued without them, and only fragments of their stories remain. Few remember them, and fewer still go on worshiping them.”
“Then why bother about the prisoner of the Old Ones escaping? After all this time, why not let him go free? What harm could he do now?”
“Well, the Queen has had him in the Deep all this time, so she must have her reasons,” Malen said. “She must know what he can do, so she seeks to retrieve him.”
“You can refuse to go on this ill-conceived chase,” Lourlan said. “You can stay home and safe and live your life. She may be my Queen, but she’s sending you into danger against a very ancient power. No reason justifies that for me.”
Findol and Malen exchanged a helpless glance.
“I would like nothing better than to stay home,” Findol said. “But I already promised her I would go. I may not be equal to the task of capturing Zaghran again, but I can keep my word and try. I won’t have the Queen turn her anger on you and your seal kin, or on Papa when he’s in her waters fishing, because I changed my mind.”
Grumbling, Lourlan got up and left the kitchen. They heard her rummaging in a chest. In a moment she returned, carrying a small blue-gray rock, which she put in Findol’s hand.
“It’s only a keepsake,” she said. “It has passed down my family for generations. The hands and paws of all your ancestors have touched it. Keep it near, and your family will always be close. You won’t be alone, no matter how far you travel.”
He put it in his pocket and got up to embrace her. Malen came and put his arms around them both.
“I must go,” Findol said, pulling away at last. “The sun will be up soon. Get some rest today. I know neither of you slept after the solstice festival last night.”
He hoisted his pack onto his back and went outside. They followed to see him off.
“Take care,” Lourlan said. “You’d better come back whole and healthy.”
“We love you, boy,” Malen said. “Good fortune go with you.”
“I’ll see you again before too long,” Findol said, and managed a brave smile. He turned and went to meet Coanh, who waited at the end of the garden path. They waved at Lourlan and Malen, and went east toward the mountains.
Aislinnye24
June 10, 2010
Another brilliant episode – and, as always, can’t wait for the next one! Great work. 🙂
Joanie
June 10, 2010
Oh man, a quest! 🙂 I can’t wait to read the next part. My favorite detail in this one was the part about the heirloom stone. Lourlan’s words just echoed in my head: “the hands and paws of all your ancestors…” just a really great line and very vivid.
PJ Kaiser
June 10, 2010
Findol seems very mature for a boy – I suppose part of it is his powers. To think of sending him off on this quest without a cell phone? Wow. I enjoyed it – looking forward to the next installment!
Anthony Venutolo
June 10, 2010
These are really cool, Gracie… How many installments are there or is it open-ended?
John Wiswell
June 10, 2010
Findol is a mature boy. He’ll need that mind where he’s going.
PJ, so many Fantasy problems would be solved by cell phones…
Gracie
June 10, 2010
Thanks for stopping by, you guys.
Aislinnye– I’m so glad you’re enjoying it. Your comments always make me smile.
Joanie– Thanks! I felt he needed some little thing to carry around. That rock may pop up again…
PJ– Ha ha ha! He may not have a cell phone, but he’ll have other things. Too funny.
Ant– The story decided to take on a life of its own during planning last week, so it’s open-ended at least for now.
John– Right? Just think how many journeys by foot or horse could be averted with a cell.
I’m rather glad you guys see Findol as mature (he turned 20 last episode). I didn’t want him to be spoiled, but I don’t want him to be a saint, either. Future installments…
Thanks again, guys. It tickles me to find your comments when I look in. 🙂
Deanna Schrayer
June 10, 2010
This is just great Grace! I love the “like water shapes stones” metaphor, and the language throughout if beautiful. I look forward to his next, or should I say first, adventure.
ganymeder
June 11, 2010
I completely empathize with the mother’s worry for her son, yet intrigued about the coming adventure. Well done!
2mara
June 11, 2010
The worst thing about reading a series.. is waiting for the next part 😉 I can’t wait to see where their quest takes them… sounds like it’s going to be one hell of an adventure.
Great post.
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Valerie
June 11, 2010
Yup, still loving this. It’s like Sam and Frodo leaving the shire… classic and wonderful. I also loved the keepsake part; sometimes you have to take a little bit of home with you, to remind you of what you’re fighting for.
Marisa Birns
June 11, 2010
Shed a little *sniffle* at seeing him go on this quest.
Many lovely details throughout this story. Really am enjoying reading this series!
T.S. Bazelli
June 11, 2010
Looking forward to the quest, and finding out more about the underwater kingdom!
Virginia.Moffatt
June 11, 2010
I like where this is going…I think in a longer piece you’d flesh it out more, but there’s lots of intrigue here to whet the appetite.
KjM
June 11, 2010
You have all the elements here, all the elements of an epic adventure. The talisman which “… The hands and paws of all your ancestors have touched it…”. The promise given, though the scale and scope of the task unknown. The hints of uncertainty about the real reasons behind the goal of the task itself. And the young man off on the adventure of a lifetime.
All this within a world you’ve created out of whole cloth. Really good reading here.
I loved “…but only shapers, like water shapes stone…” Of course his mother would talk in terms of water, given who she is. You match wording and world view to the characters in your story very well.
Good storytelling.
Tony Noland
June 11, 2010
So, what’s the deal with the rock?
Walt
June 11, 2010
Excellent work once again. This reads like the calm before the storm. I’m looking forward to the confrontation.
Mark Kerstetter
June 11, 2010
I like the description of the Old Ones. Findol’s question about why not letting this so-called dangerous one go free seemed sensible. I’m looking forward to how that question gets answered.
Aidan Fritz
June 11, 2010
It’s always good to bring along a good cook. This series is another reason to enjoy Fridays.
Eric J. Krause
June 12, 2010
Another excellent installment. This one brought the characters and their motivations more to light, which is great. I’m looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Olivia Tejeda
June 12, 2010
This is the first one I’ve read, and now I’m compelled to read what’s come before … and what will come after. Great read! Thanks, Grace! ~Olivia
J. Dane Tyler
June 12, 2010
Another fantastic piece! I love this story and the power it has to subtly draw the reader into the world it creates and rush them breathlessly along, entrenched with the characters. I worry with the parents and I’m filled with anticipation with the boys! An amazing bit of writing; brilliant.
Mari Juniper
June 12, 2010
Ohh, this installment is touching! I love this story. It seems I’ve lost one episode, so I’ll go back and read it. 🙂
Dragons are wonderful ‘little’ things, aren’t they? heh *g*
Mari Juniper
June 12, 2010
Ok. Officially me wants more. Now! heh ;P
Sam
June 13, 2010
Goodness me, but this is an excellent episode! You had me enthralled right from the chopping carrots line. I could quite happily curl up and read a novel length piece set in this world (hint, hint!). Can’t wait for the next installment.
Josie
June 13, 2010
I love the quality and ‘feel’ of your writing, Grace, and like Sam, I’d happily read a novel from you. Looking forward to the next instalment 🙂
Alan W. Davidson
June 13, 2010
That was a nice, touching scene Gracie. The dialogue flows along really well. I’m jealous of that as I struggle with it a lot.
dannigrrl
June 13, 2010
Another nice installment. Can’t wait to see what happens next. 🙂
Mari Juniper
June 21, 2010
Ohh, I came back thinking there was another installment…. *sniffs* 😦