Nebi was a fine cat, Abyssinian by breed. His ruddy fur was shiny, and his body was powerful and sleek. At one year old, he was full of dangerous adolescent energy, and his human, a young woman named Coral, had long ago put away all her breakable knickknacks. She’d also taken down the drapes and put up blinds in the windows, as Nebi was fond of climbing.
Nebi and Coral loved each other. She chased him through the house, and then he chased her. She teased him with long ribbons, and he sailed through the air after them just to hear her laugh. When she went to bed, he slept draped across her neck to protect her from any predators lurking in the dark. He had never seen any, but that didn’t mean they weren’t there.
But one fateful day, the predator walked right through the door. Coral let him in. Nebi felt his fur stand on end all over his body. He arched his back and puffed his tail with all the threat he could muster. He growled deep in his throat like a beast ten times his size.
The predator looked down at him and laughed. He set down the briefcase he carried by the door.
“What’s this?” he said. “Am I invading your territory, kitty?” He bent down, pretending to pet him. Nebi hissed, and the predator gave him a dark look and straightened up. Now Coral bent down and scooped Nebi up in her arms.
“He doesn’t trust strangers too much,” she explained. Nebi purred against her neck, wondering why she would lie to this predator. He tolerated most strangers, but this male was different. Why couldn’t Coral see that?
“Well,” the male said, “it’s kind of sweet. I think he’s a little jealous.” Coral laughed and put Nebi down.
“He just has to get to know you better, and so do I,” she said. “Come on, I’ll make you a drink.” The male followed her into the kitchen, and Nebi heard glasses clinking.
He took the opportunity to investigate the male’s briefcase. It was covered in his scent, which Nebi found distasteful. He wished Coral’s nose was as sensitive as his own. If she could smell what he smelled, she’d make the predator leave. Perhaps he could take matters into his own paws. This was his house, too. He’d show Coral this male was not to be trusted.
He turned, lifted his magnificent tail, and sprayed the briefcase.
And got caught.
“Damn cat, what are you doing?” The male came running and tried to kick Nebi, but Nebi was far too quick. He jumped easily to one side and hid behind the sofa, peeking around its corner to keep watch.
“What are you doing?” Coral yelled. “You don’t kick my cat, either, Joe.”
“This is an expensive case, and that little bastard ruined it,” Joe said. “Keep him away from me, you hear?”
Coral got a paper towel and began to wipe the case down.
“It’s not ruined. Look, it’ll clean up just fine-”
“Stop,” Joe said, and gripped Coral’s wrists. “Just leave it-”
Coral’s hand bumped the case’s latch, and it sprang open. A roll of duct tape and an evil-looking knife fell out onto the floor.
Coral looked up at Joe, and then her eyes grew wide. Nebi saw Joe’s hands tighten on her wrists.
“I didn’t want you to see that just yet,” Joe said. “I wanted to have a little fun while you were still conscious.”
A white rage flared through every cell of Nebi’s body. With a yowl that sounded like the roar of his wild cousins, he leaped onto Joe’s back. Suddenly he felt large and heavy as a mountain lion. Like a master hunter, he was all teeth and claws now, scratching, biting, tearing the predator’s flesh, looking for bone.
Joe howled in surprise and pain. He fell to the floor, and Nebi the Hunter was on top of him, pinning him where he lay. There was his neck, exposed and vulnerable. One bite over his airway, and Nebi could end him.
“Don’t!” Joe pleaded. “Where’d he come from? He’ll kill me! Help me, Coral! Call 9-1-1!”
Coral bent down and stroked Nebi’s back. He growled impatiently, wanting to take that suffocating bite. He stared into Joe’s disbelieving eyes.
“It’s okay, Nebi,” she said. Then to Joe, “I knew your sweet talk was too good to be true. Good thing I always trust Nebi’s judgment about people.”
“This isn’t your little cat,” Joe squealed. “This thing must’ve escaped from a zoo somewhere. Call 9-1-1 before he kills me!”
“That’s a great idea. Watch him, Nebi,” Coral said, and went to the phone. In a moment she said, “Yes, I’d like to report an attempted murder. I’m lucky, though, and subdued my attacker. I think you may already be looking for this guy. He has some weird stuff in his briefcase. Hurry, please. I don’t know how long I can keep him down.”
She hung up the phone and sat on the floor beside them.
“What the hell is going on?” Joe wailed, staring at the great beast lying on top of him. Nebi took deep pleasure in the sharp scent of his fear.
“Nebi’s the best cat ever,” Coral said. “I was lucky to find him. He takes good care of me.” She bent over and looked into Joe’s terrified face.
“Oh, did I tell you what Nebi’s name means?” she went on. “You’ll love this. It’s Egyptian for panther.” She kissed Nebi’s head, right between the ears. Joe began to sob. Sirens shrilled through the air.
When the police got there, they barely noticed Nebi. He lay on the sofa, washing his paws like any normal house cat would.
At last they took Joe and his briefcase away, while Joe babbled about mountain lions. No one listened to him.
Nebi’s secret was safe.





Louise Broadbent
January 20, 2011
I really liked the whole cat vs rapist thing but I think it would have been better if you kept it more based in reality. But then, I have a thing for realism so that might just be me.
Good flash.
GP Ching
January 20, 2011
I love how you made Nebi’s soul bigger than his body. When he really needed to stand up for his owner, he became as big as he always was inside. Good kitty. Very good kitty. Nicely done!
John Wiswell
January 20, 2011
Joe’s terror and confusion is very cute. “This thing must have escaped the zoo!” I’m still chuckling.
Normal-sized cats are plenty evil. I’ve had to deal with one far more than I’d like.
Sam Adamson
January 21, 2011
Love this! I’m a sucker for a cat story, and this is one excellent cat story. Nebi sounds like my kind of feline. With any luck Joe will have nightmares for years.
adampb
January 21, 2011
Nice story from the cat’s perspective. I like to think that in each little cat is a huge one wanting to break out (and this from a dog person). Nebi is well wicked.
Adam B @revhappiness
Anneke
January 21, 2011
Powerful cat, I like that. No dog could beat that. Great story.
Valerie
January 21, 2011
I’m not sure whether I wish one of my cats could do that, or whether I’m glad they can’t. Love a little just desserts in time for lunch.
Deanna Schrayer
January 21, 2011
Yes, yes, yes! Gracie, this is fabulous! I love that you told the story from Nebi’s POV, very effective. I was gripped from the get go and thoroughly enjoyed the ride.
techtigger
January 21, 2011
nice! Every cat thinks they’re panther sized, so it’s awesome that this one really is *lol* give ‘em hell, Nebi!
Joanie
January 21, 2011
Awesome! At first I thought Nebi was just overreacting but eek! I wonder if she lured this jerk home as a snack for Nebi or if she really was hoping for someone nice? Although I think any nice guy would be tough for Nebi to approve of! Hahaha!
I totally wish I knew Nebi’s backstory and how she found him (or more than likely he found her as cats go).
My best friend was picked out by her kitty. She kept trying to pet the other shelter cats and this one kept pushing the others out of the way and leaping onto her lap! At last she realized she just had to have the little cutie and took her home.
Raven Corinn Carluk
January 21, 2011
Good kitty!
Steve Green
January 21, 2011
Nice bit of horror with just a touch of tongue-in-cheek running through it, luckily for Coral her choice in cats is superior to her taste in boyfriends.
Jason Coggins
January 21, 2011
I think most cats believe they’re really still big apex predators on the inside … but in this case that belief was most justified. This flash took me from smiling to fear to smiling again, ace.
KjM
January 21, 2011
Pretty little pussycat – or not so little this time.
That was fun, Gracie. I am fond of cats, I think they are magical, mystical creatures. And it seems they are.
A great romp.
Well done.
Seleste
January 21, 2011
Great story from the cat’s PoV. Didn’t see the shifting coming, but loved it
dannigrrl
January 21, 2011
Cats have always creeped me out and this really didn’t help with that, Gracie.
But I am glad he’s at least got good sense. Who says cats only worry about themselves?
flyingscribbler
January 22, 2011
I liked the cat’s perspective on this incident too: it makes the events seem more realistic and believable and of course, much more interesting.
Julie (Okami)
January 22, 2011
I love this!! Every woman needs a Nebi!
mgideon
January 22, 2011
I loved that this is from Nebi’s perspective. That, while the situation with Joe seemed quite dangerous for Coral, to Nebi it was no more troublesome than taking out the trash. Really dug this. Well done!
Mike Robertson
January 22, 2011
As a cat lover and fan of magic realism, this story kicked butt. Very well told. Thanks!
Eric J. Krause
January 23, 2011
Nebi is quite a cat! Too bad everyone can’t have a Nebi in their lives. Good story!
Icy Sedgwick
January 23, 2011
Nebi is BRILLIANT. I’m very much a cat person and I do think that some felines can be as protective of their owners as dogs. This story proves that just like dogs, every cat will have his day!
Blackbirdsong
January 23, 2011
I LOVE Nebi and PLEASE don’t let this be the only Nebi story! I used to have a protective cat, of course she couldn’t turn into a panther, but if she could, she would have. Great story Gracie.
Maria Kelly
January 23, 2011
I <3 Nebi! This is a kick ass story! I love it that he transformed. Bastard had it coming. LOL!
Maria Kelly
January 23, 2011
Oh, and Abby’s are my absolute FAVORITE breed. I’ve never had one, but I’d love to. They do look like miniature mountain lions!